人物介紹:

敏~可愛...傻氣...超多男仔鍾意佢...不過└俊┘開頭就話佢白痴...扮可愛...後尾............

琳~敏既好朋友...人緣好...鍾意耀..

澄~同佢地都係好朋友...好fd...鍾意風...

俊~靚仔一個...為人爆cool...但係好專一

風~靚仔...口花花..鍾意撩女仔...超多女...

耀~靚仔...隨和...好nice..超多女鍾意

暫時咁多...人物會陸續加....
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敏:澄澄...琳琳~你地得未呀?

敏,琳,澄3個一齊住...因為佢地既呀爸呀媽係合作夥伴...所以佢地超fd...

佢地既daddy,mummy成日出chip..冇咩時間理佢地...

澄:未呀...死人凌海琳同我爭次厠呀...

敏:你地一齊用唔得架咩?

澄+琳:唔得...

敏真係冇佢地乎...佢地日日都嗌交,...但係轉個頭又攬頭攬頸...

敏:我唔等你地架啦....

呢句說話一出...佢地就9秒9既速度搞掂晒所有野...

番到學校喇....

敏:新一年新開始....

澄:55...唔知我地3個係咪一班呢?

敏:你想同風一班炸掛?

講中晒...冇聲出....

琳琳係到大叫....

敏:你嗌咩呀?

琳:好野...我同耀一班呀....不過都同你地一班...

敏:兩個都重色軾友..唉...好失望囉.....

澄+琳:你第時有左鍾意既人...就會好似我地咁架啦....

敏:第時先算啦

上到班房..佢地兩個飛起敏...唔同敏坐...兩個一齊坐

之後就有一個超靚仔既人坐左係敏隔離...

不過佢個樣超cool...又串..一d都唔nice

故事正式開始.../

CH.2 你個乞人憎下


敏覺得好奇怪...點解佢度度唔坐...偏偏坐係敏隔離...

呢個時候,坐係敏前面既澄澄同琳琳就話啦...

澄+琳:你隔離咪有個靚仔LO..好好同人地溝通啦...

唔知係咪比個男仔聽到...

男:想溝我呀?照下鏡先啦....

敏梗係嬲架啦...

敏:邊個話溝你...你唔好咁自大啦...

男:係咩?哦...你話係咪係囉...

敏:咩我話係就係呀...而係我咩都冇講過...

男;至憎呢D係到扮可愛既女仔

敏:你洗唔洗鬧得咁過份....你個乞人憎...

眼淺既敏已經想喊...佢走左出去班房...

佢跑呀跑...撞到一個人...正想鬧人個陣...見到佢...覺得佢幾靚仔...

X:你無事呀?

敏:冇...

X:你叫咩名呀?我叫歐俊強...

敏:我叫李思敏..

強:你搞咩呀?我撞到你一下炸WO...咁就想喊...

敏:都唔關你事....我只係遇到一個超超超超爆爆爆爆爆爆勁勁勁勁乞人憎既人啫...

強:下...咁誇...你而家去邊呀?唔洗上堂呀?

敏:唔想上呀...

強:你咩班呀?我3D

敏:你講真架?我都係呀...

強:唔想上就唔好上啦...我地去玩啦...

敏:得唔得架?

敏從來都冇試過咁...有D驚...

強:有咩事...我橕住你...

敏:咁呀...

強已經捉住敏隻手...跑入課室攡書包

入到班房....人人都望住佢地兩個拖手...發出D WOW WOW既聲...

拰完書包...佢地就即刻走...琳+澄問敏野...敏都聽唔到...
CH.3 走堂


而俊(坐係敏隔離個男仔)對呢個叫敏既女仔...冇咩感覺...只係覺得佢扮可愛...

敏:你帶我去邊到架?

強:好多小朋友都鍾意去既地方...

敏:下....

原楚強想帶敏去海洋公園....

敏自從10歲之後就冇去過海洋公園...而家去到...覺得好驚喜...

強:行啦...一定會好開心既...

敏佢地玩左好多機動遊戲...敏玩跳樓個陣...強就係下面幫敏影相...

敏落到去睇番D相...即刻"X"左D相...因為好影到佢好醜..

佢地又去左睇盈盈,樂樂...總之就玩得好開心...

玩到6黠個陣...佢地終於捨得走...

強:點呀?玩得開唔開心呀?

敏:開心...開心...好開心...

強:開心就得啦....

敏:咁我地而家去邊呀?

強:去睇戲...食飯...

敏:好呀...除左DADDY,MUMMY,琳琳,澄澄之外....就得你一個對我咁好...多謝你呀...

強:要以身相許架...]

敏:好.....難...(笑)

之後佢地就去左睇戲..食飯..

番到屋企...敏已經好攰...點知..琳,澄仲纏住佢...

琳:你今日做咩走堂呀>?

澄:今日個男仔叫咩名呀?你溝到佢呀?

琳:你唔好嘈住啦...我問緊野呀...

澄:喂...好似係我問先....

敏:喂....你地一次過問咁多野...點答

澄:係咪衰啦你...凌海琳...]

敏:好啦好啦...我去左海洋公園...個男仔叫歐俊強...

     佢冇溝我...我冇溝佢...我唔係同佢拍拖...我同佢識左一日都未夠...

     我好攰呀...聽日再講啦...

敏就去左沖涼訓啦....

ch.4 冇啦...我既初吻冇啦


敏一番到學校...就將佢同俊個張台隔到無雷公咁完...

因為敏好憎佢...佢未試過咁憎一個人...

敏個心入面....憎恨...

俊一番到黎...見到佢地兩個將台分開左...

感覺上覺得呢個女仔好好玩...

俊呀..俊呀..你仲咩咁快對人改觀呀?

俊:做咩姐...好憎我呀?

俊從來都冇試過咁撩女仔...

敏冇理佢...心入面:白痴仔...仲使問既...

俊諗:哎呀~扮coo添....

俊:喂...做咩唔采人姐...

敏:你好煩呀...我點解要l采你姐...

俊:喂..靚妹...好串wo..

敏:對你咪係囉...

俊好鬼嬲...佢突然諗左樣衰野...

俊錫敏....敏超驚...佢d眼淚又標出黎...

敏諗:冇啦..我既初吻冇啦...仲要比左個衰人..

俊:你唔係呀?錫一錫都喊...

敏仲喊得勁左...

俊:你唔好話比我知呢個係你初吻?

敏成個跪左係地下到...

俊:唔好喊啦...sor...我唔知...

俊好內疚...

強走埋黎...

強:咩事呀?唔好喊啦...敏...(佢攬住敏)

敏覺得好有安全感...

俊講晒件事比佢聽...

強:傻女黎既...

敏:咁呢個係我初吻黎架ma.....(仲喊緊)

強:比左佢都唔錯呀...佢係好仔黎架...

敏:我唔覺..佢係衰人...

呢個時候...雯用d仇恨既目光望住敏...

雯:你竟然搶走呀俊?.....你唔會有好日子過

俊:家下我好失禮你咩/?

敏:少少咁啦...

俊:仲識串人...即係冇事啦...

敏覺得佢比強攬住個一刻...好有安全感...

好溫暖....

........待
ch.5 比人打既感覺唔好受


上集略略提過既雯...終於有搞作...

佢叫埋風d馬去打敏....

敏行番屋企個陣....

敏:咩事呀?(佢比人拉左係一條後行到...)

x:雯姐,係咪佢?

雯:係呀...唔該晒...

敏:你係邊個?你做咩捉我黎呢到?

雯:你連我都唔識...點係學校生活...

敏:我唔理你係邊個..咁你捉我黎呢到做咩呀?(驚ing)

雯:冇咩野...想警告你...唔好諗住搶走俊...佢係我架...

敏:你冇野呀ma?我搶走佢?

雯打左佢一巴...

雯:醒定d....(轉身走)

敏諗:關我咩事呀?點解要打我wo...我咁大個都未比人打過架..(喊)

風:靚女...做咩係到喊?

敏:風....我...都係冇野啦...(走)

風:喂...你冇野呀ma...

敏:冇野啦...拜拜

敏走左去...風覺得佢好莫名其妙...

敏喊得好勁...冇意欲停..

敏番到屋企...即刻扮番開心...佢唔想澄同琳擔心佢..

點知...第2日...

一番到學校...

俊就同佢d靚諗住打敏...

因為雯同佢講話敏打左佢一巴...俊信晒佢..

俊不嬲都當雯係妹妹...所以幫佢出頭...但雯就以為俊鍾意佢..

敏比人打到飛起...

俊:下次唔好撩事鬧非,,,

敏已經唔想再講野...唔知點解...佢琴日比雯打...

都冇咁hurt...但係比俊打...佢就好hurt...

敏走左上天台...

佢好想知道佢做錯d咩?佢點解要比人打...

佢係天台到訓著左...

醒番個陣...已經係忍ch time...

俊係班房到...冇出到去..

敏一番到去...佢就怒脾佢...

敏都冇出聲...個樣超唔開心...隻眼好紅..

俊覺得好唔開心...唔知點解...佢好似感受到佢份唔開心咁...

俊:你冇事呀ma?(溫柔...怒氣冇晒)

敏覺得佢好得人驚...佢今朝早個陣先打完佢...

個樣超恐怖...但係而家就好溫柔...

敏冇理到佢...

俊:你冇野ma?(佢抓全佢隻手)

敏:走開呀...(超超超超大聲)

俊估唔到佢有咁大反應...

強佢走左入黎...

強見到敏果個咁驚既樣...就攬住佢...

同佢走左出去...

課室得番俊一個...佢見到強攬住敏個陣...

個心唔識形容...

敏好唔開心...佢覺得比人打既感覺唔好受...尤其係比俊打.....

ch.6 sorry...原諒我!


風:你地有冇搞錯..果個雯嗌你地你點人相..你就去...佢係大佬定我係大佬呀?

x:sor...風哥...

風:仲要傷到人..你點知人地咁多野...

x:咁...

風:咁咁咁...咁你以後跟佢啦...

x:好對唔住...

風同佢條靚去左敏個到...

x:sor呀...

風:咩叫sor呀...sorry呀...嗱...如果人地唔原諒你你就唔好跟我

x:sorry...

敏:算啦...你都冇份打我...

敏又行開左....敏呢排心事重重...唔知點解..

俊知道佢打錯人之後...就好想同佢講sorry...可惜一直都冇機會

.........班房......

俊:敏...我...對唔住呀..我知道...我..

敏佢寫左一張字仔比佢...

" 傷口撕裂後...再說要補救...有用嗎? ''

俊:我都同你講sorry啦...你仲想點?

又傅一張字條..." 我只係想我地保持番距離..冇必要唔好講野 "

俊:你諗住一世都唔同我講野?

敏點頭...

俊一股氣湧上心頭..佢就再冇出聲啦...

佢唔知道點解敏會企得咁硬,,,於是佢就問雯..

俊:雯..究竟你同敏有咩恩怨?

雯:我都唔知我得罪左佢d咩...佢打我...(扮可憐)

俊:你冇呃我?

雯:你信果個賤人都唔信我?

俊:你小心d講野..佢唔係賤人...以你既性格..你都會比人蝦?

雯:你飲左佢d迷湯呀?

俊冇出聲...

雯:係呀...係我屈佢呀...唔比咩?

俊:你....(兜打打落佢到)

作者的話:好好好...打得好...抵佢死...

雯跪左落地下到...佢估唔到佢同俊感情會比一個咁既女仔搞到咁...

其實一直都係佢一廂情願...俊都冇話過佢鍾意佢...

佢d怒氣直線上升...佢話既...有敏就就冇佢

作者的話;冇左你就好啦...拍手中

俊走去捉住敏隻手...一口氣跑左上天台...

敏:你捉我上黎做咩呀?你唔係想...喇..我嗌架

俊:你終於肯同我講野喇咩?(覺得佢好可愛)

敏:我唔想架....我費事果個雯又話我搶走你...跟住又打我...然後又要比你打..

    你都係陪下你條女啦...唔係佢又周圍發顛打人...

俊知道佢真係好過份...因為敏係因為佢先比雯打..

但係之後佢又打敏...

俊跪左落地下....

俊:sorry...

敏比佢嚇親...

敏:喂,,,你起身先啦...唉..我原諒你啦...得未?


伋開心到成個彈起...錫左敏一啖...之後就走番落去..

敏呆呆咁企係原地...發自內心咁甜絲絲地笑....


記住...密切留意下一集..." 呷醋 "

ch.7 呷醋


俊同敏經過呢件事之後仲fd左添...去邊都一齊..除左去toliet...

俊想約敏食飯...

俊:今日一齊食飯呀...

敏:唔得呀...我約左人...

俊:咪推左佢囉...

敏:咁我應承左人地呀ma

俊:你只可以陪我...(嬲嬲地)

敏:點解呀?

俊:因為......我好似鍾意左你(超細聲)

敏:咩呀?講咩呀...

俊:因為你同我kiss過囉...同我kiss過既女仔淨係得你一個炸...

    所以你係我既...你要陪我...

敏:采你都傻呀...(好可愛咁笑)

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學校門口....

敏係到等緊強...

俊係佢後面睇下佢約左邊個...

強出左黎...敏就同佢一齊行...

俊走左上去...撓住敏隻手...

敏:你做咩呀?(面紅)

俊同強都覺得佢好得意...

俊:我都話左你係我架啦/...你要陪我...(好似細路)

敏忍唔住笑...

敏:唔得呀...我約左佢...下次先啦,...

俊:唔得...一齊去呀...

佢地兩個未應承...俊就撓住敏隻手行左去...

強見到佢地兩個一路上打情罵悄..有d唔開心..

俊:哇...乜食沙拉咁健康呀....減肥

敏嬲嬲地...

敏:xx俊.......

佢地就係吵吵鬧鬧咁軍馱@個晏...

番到學校...有件超超超驚天動地既事...

miss:今個禮拜6學校有個舞會...請各位同學盛裝出席...

       你地仲可以跳舞添...

男a:係咪同女仔跳先?

miss:各位女同學...對唔住...係

d男仔:yeah...

d女仔:x...

俊諗:我一定要請到敏跳舞...

小息既時候...超多男仔走埋黎請敏係個日同佢地跳舞...

俊唔知點解無名火起....

俊走埋黎錫呀敏

男a:妖...人地名花有主既....

男b:係囉....仲想約佢添...

敏:你做咩呀?(面紅)

俊:你面紅個樣好可愛...我就係鍾意你可愛既樣...

敏塊面仲紅過岩岩...

敏(佢咩意思呀....搞到我個心卜卜跳)

俊(哇....點解每次錫佢都咁有feel既...)

敏+俊(我好似....鍾意左佢)

ch.8 灰姑娘與兩位王子


敏:琳琳...澄澄...你地兩個將我扮到似咩呀?

琳:哇...你睇下幾靚...


澄:係囉...幾靚...

敏上到鏡前面照一照...佢好似成個灰姑娘咁...好靚..

敏:乜呢個真係我黎架?

呢個時侯,琳同澄就行出黎...佢地兩個扮白雪公主...都幾cute呀....

佢地就咁番學校個晚會...佢地3個一入到去...個個都望住佢地3個...

男a:哇...好靚呀...我就話中間(敏)果個最靚..

男b:我就話左邊(琳)果個最靚

俊一見到敏行入黎...就想請佢跳舞...點知雯走出黎...

雯:不如你同我...

俊:我唔得閒呀...係咁啦...

俊想搵敏...但係敏已經唔見左....

強:may i...(向住敏)

敏諗住應承既時候...俊及時走到過黎...

俊:may i

敏望住兩個王子...唔知點選擇....佢...

突然之間...全場黑晒...黑到咩都睇唔到...有人將敏位開...

司儀:請各位去搵你地既parier啦...

敏咩都睇唔到...佢搵黎搵去....突然前面有個人將佢擋住..

係邊個呢?係....

敏:你係邊個...

強:敏...係咪你呀...

敏聽到強把聲...有d失望....

全場既燈開番...

司儀:let's dance

敏見到俊同雯一齊...好唔開心....

呢個時候...敏見到琳同緊一個男仔好開心咁dance...

果個男仔係耀....佢就好啦...同到佢鍾意既人一齊...

澄呢?澄同呀風dance緊...唉...敏佢覺得佢地好好采...

強:may i

敏:唔好意思...我有d唔舒服呀...我番屋企先啦...

強:...下...使唔使送你..?

敏:唔使...88(轉身)

強望住佢...俊都望佢走...佢推開雯...追左出去...

俊:敏...

敏:俊!你,,,你點解係到既?(驚喜)

俊:我黎搵你dance...

敏:你唔係同雯dance咩...(呷醋)

俊:e...有人呷醋....

敏:邊...邊有wo...我...只...不...過...奇...怪..姐...(口吃+怕醜)

俊:係呀...?

敏:係呀....唔係你以為咩呀...

俊:may i

敏:下...係呢到?

俊:55....你驚咩姐...黎啦

敏同俊就係到篇篇起舞...一個王子...一個公主...好夾...

同時...妒忌既眼光都望住佢地

ch.9 保護你係我ge職責


星期6個晚佢地玩得好開心....

星期一番到學校...點解d氣芬咁奇怪?

周圍既人都好靜....

敏:咩事呀...點解...d人唔出聲既...發生咩事呀?

琳:你唔知咩?俊同隔離學校個大佬打交呀...係我地學校添...

敏:下...咁誇...知唔知為左咩呀?

琳:咁就唔知啦...

突然...有一個勁有大佬款既人走出黎....都幾靚仔...

俊走埋去敏個到...

敏:你唔好打交啦...我驚你有事....(緊張)

俊:你緊張我呀?(開心)

敏:........咪玩啦...我真係驚你有事.....

俊:唔使驚..我一定會贏...(勝利既笑+轉身)

敏諗左一陣....就大嗌:加油呀...一定要贏

佢講得好大聲...隔離d人都望住佢...呀大佬都係...

大佬:呢個女仔都幾靚wo...可惜呀...做左人地條女

大佬諗諗下....佢有個主意.....

佢突然間又話唔打....仲走埋...

俊:縮沙王...敏...行囉..上課室

敏:哦...(個心有d不詳預感)

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放學個陣....

敏自己一個行番屋企...

突然...有人行出黎....

敏:你做咩呀?你咪係今日果個...

彥:我叫呀彥...做我條女呀?

敏:下...你咁直接既....我唔可做你條女

彥:點解...因為果個呀俊?佢跟本配你唔起,.,,

敏:唔關你呀...你叫我做你條女..係因為鍾意我呀?唔係呀ma>..拜拜

彥佢捉住敏隻手...

彥:我係認真架...

敏:我要走啦...拜...

彥唔比佢走..俊佢走出黎打左彥一下...

俊:你唔好再煩住佢...

彥又打番佢一下...正確黎講..佢地係到打架...

敏:停手啦...俊我地行...

敏拉左俊走....

俊:點呀...你岩岩冇事呀ma?

敏:我點會有事呀...你有冇事呀?我好驚你整親..

俊:唔會...就算整到..我都要保護你..因為保護你係我既職責...

敏:.........我.....

俊:行啦...傻妹...

敏:做咩嗌人傻好wo..我叫敏呀!

俊:行啦...傻好敏...

敏:衰人俊....

就係咁..呢幾日就過左啦...

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