日暮籬 2008-7-18 12:21
[口語] 誓不拍拖?"上"
﹁誓不﹏拍拖*? 人物簡介:
主角:
女
欣:成績平平..個樣都係ok..(f.2e)
個人比較有d灰...比前男友呃...超HURT
發誓不拍拖之一員
婷:靚女..成績好好..(f.2e)發誓不拍拖之一員
係呀欣最好既fd...(由小學識到宜家)成日開解呀欣....
但係自己有重大事情發生左就唔會同呀欣講(驚令呀欣更煩)
因明白男仔追女仔既本性...堅信e個年齡根本冇真愛...
發誓不拍拖之一員
心:個樣ok..成績麻麻..有時好串,好時傻傻地...(f.2e)
都係呀欣既小學同學...試過係發誓後..唔理誓言拍拖...
結果......................發誓不拍拖之一員
男
希:成績爆好....樣都OK令仔..不過d$就唔係ok多...係好多......仲有好多花痴....
但係戀愛經驗係0...從來唔知鍾意一個人係咩感覺....
最憎既就係個D又姣又自以為是既女仔..
信:呀欣小學+同班同學...令仔...一直對心心有feel.....
都係一個好既傾訴對象
偉:晴 bf...班手下....不過都係鍾意就去睇下佢地...
唔鍾意就唔理佢地.....因為呀晴唔鍾意佢成日同班手下一齊
(都係有錢人)
朗:有時口花花....但比人感覺孩子氣....
都幾令仔.....
遲下會出現既:
女
丁丁:呀欣小學同學.....發誓不拍拖之一員
自細就因為父母離婚,再+上童年陰影...對男仔全冇興趣(p.s佢唔係TB)
係第一個發誓唔拍拖既人..仲話要做老姑婆...
清文:呀欣小學同學...
對感情十分專一既一個女仔
雪:呀欣小學同學...平凡女生...同丁丁+清文同一中學
男
水:清文bf
唔多重要既人物
女
晴:同班同學...比較靜既女仔..(bf 呀偉)
詩:同校唔同班既fd...有錢女...好開朗...堅強(bf呀明)
珊:係呀婷同欣既傾訴對像....
男
軒:呀欣前bf....
光:心心已故既bf
明:有錢仔一名人,以前好鍾意玩女仔,不過自從同左呀詩一齊就動左真情...
*遲下會再更新*
before ch.1
lunch後 f.3(3樓)走廊....
珊:你2個做咩咁好死走上黎搵我呀?
欣:唔好意思我地唔係黎搵你ge...
婷:ar欣咁又唔好咁同珊珊講...
珊:都係呀婷好....
欣:其實我地係黎搵呀詩ge...佢就黎生日啦...你知唔知呀?
珊:我梗係知啦...不過佢生日個日我唔得閒呀...
欣:有異性冇人性.....
珊:我話遲d陪返佢囉....
婷:人地生日你都掛住去拍拖....(打鐘...)
上堂啦...我地落返去先啦...你見到呀詩同佢講我地搵過佢啦..
珊:ok,bye
(呀婷同欣就落返去啦...呀珊一入課室[3c])
朗:嘩珊姐...個幾條女邊個黎嫁...點解我未見過嫁...
偉:個幾個女仔呀..好似係2e嫁....
珊:嘩...你又知..
偉:梗係....我係邊個呀...令仔偉喎...點會有女我係未見過嫁(明顯串緊某人)
希:車...呀晴(偉gf)係個班呀嘛....你唔好扮野啦...
珊:hohoho..呀偉哥下次唔扮啦....hahaha
2e課室
心:點呀搵唔搵到呀詩ar??
婷:2d(詩係2d的)又唔見佢,我地去左3c問珊珊...佢都話冇見過
欣:我睇佢9成都係去左同佢個明哥一齊ge啦....
心:除左佢個呀明哥佢仲會同邊個一齊喎....傻既都知啦...
欣:...ar..你個死婆...你宜家咩意思先....
心:冇冇冇...邊有呀...你諗錯隔離啦.....
欣:...羅惠心.....
婷:呀心呀欣唔好嘈啦....ms就黎黎嫁啦....
欣:我大人有大量唔同佢嘈....
心: =p
[上堂]
心=訓緊教..
欣=雲遊
婷=好乖咁聽書
[放學]
欣:下..咁快放學嫁啦....
心:好野...又過左一日啦...
婷:呀欣...你頭先係道發咩夢呀....
心:哦..你死啦....發春夢...
欣:你up乜野呀...死婆..我諗緊買咩比呀詩好呀...佢又咁有錢..咩都有啦...
攪到我都唔知買咩比佢好....
婷:哦...佢...死啦..我都唔知呀...
心:hey...我地咁fd..唔送比佢佢都唔會mind既...
婷:講就咁講啫..話哂人地生日...唔送野好似好過份喎..
欣:咪就係囉...所以我咪諗左成日都唔知點囉...
[e個時候呀詩就係佢地面前出現]
詩:我有好消息要同大家講.....
心:係咩呀...有野就快d講啦....
詩:我生日個日你地留左比我嫁啦可...
心+欣+婷:梗係....
詩:呀明提議去海洋公園ar..叫我約埋班fd一齊去ar...
心:(2眼發光)真既.......
詩:55..同埋e個月我呀爸呀媽都唔係屋企呀....
e排你地黎陪我好唔好呀....
心:好呀好呀....我一定陪....
欣:我都應該得既.....
婷:我唔知得唔得喎...我問過我呀媽再復你...ok?
詩:ok..不過要快喎...最好聽日你地就黎到我道訓啦...
心:嘩..你咁心急嫁...
詩:日日都得我一個係屋企好悶啫....
欣:咁好啦...我今晚復你....嘩就黎5點啦....我閃先...
婷:等埋...我又閃....走啦88....
心:呀詩88...喂....唔好行咁快啦....
[[i] 本帖最後由 日暮籬 於 2008-8-15 20:40 編輯 [/i]]
日暮籬 2008-7-18 12:22
ch.1-1
[呀詩生日之前個日....]
呀欣,婷,心同佢一齊去左行街買3....
呀詩話要比個扮令d比呀明睇喎.....
[去海洋公園既大日子]7:00
呀欣冇啦啦行左入去呀詩個房道大叫......
欣:呀詩...生日快樂呀.......
詩:多謝...不過下次係唔洗咁大聲ge la.........
欣:我驚你聽唔到呀ma....
心:(拍一拍呀欣)..連我係出面都聽到....不過..呀詩生日快樂呀....
婷:生日快樂.....
詩:....thx.....鳴鳴太感動啦(扮喊)...
欣:唔好再扮啦...再扮落去你就唔洗扮令嫁啦....
詩:係喎.....(講完就沖左入廁所)
[2個鐘之後]
[金鐘地鐵站]
明:呀詩......e道呀....
明:生日快樂....
希+偉+朗+信+晴:生日快樂ar....
詩:多謝哂...e呀晴你.....o..明啦...(因為呀晴個bf呀偉係道)
明:我同你介紹,e個係呀希,呀信同埋呀朗.....
心:(見到呀詩行埋佢地道)呀詩..等我黎啦....我自我介紹....
我叫呀心...佢地就係呀婷同埋呀欣.....
欣:你洗唔洗呀....(心諗:唔洗咁姣瓜)
心: =p
詩:行啦...唔好嘈啦....晏d就多人嫁啦....
日暮籬 2008-7-18 12:23
ch.1-2
[車上面]
男仔有男仔講....女仔有女仔講...
個個都好興奮...
婷:呀欣...我地好似好耐都冇試過咁多人一齊玩la...
真係好開心呀....
欣:係就係好耐冇咁樣玩過...不過....
信(係後既既呀信就話):呀欣...又話耐冇出黎玩....出得黎就要開開心心啦...
不過咩呀....
欣:咁又係...係呢..我地等陣去到玩咩先呀....
信:梗係玩個個太空摩天輪
呀希你話係咪啦....
希:冇所謂啦...反正我又唔係好似係咁...怕死...haha...
信:咩呀....上次黎係多年前呀...你仲記得....- -
希:我又唔似你咁老人痴呆..點會唔記得....
欣,婷: -o-
婷:你地講左咁耐都未決定到喎...= =
欣:係囉....快d決定啦.....
心:決定d咩呀...等我黎決啦....
欣:= ="又關你事....
心:我聽到咪關我事囉...
婷:咁你聽到...可5可以講低你既決定呢???
心:5....玩滑浪飛船啦...個個咁既太空摩天輪轉到我頭都暈埋....
詩:心心你仲講....落車啦.....
[入到ocean park入面]
信:邊個跟我去玩太空摩天輪....
心:我.....唔去...
信:車...死心心....鬼要你跟....
希:我陪你...呀朗你點呀...
朗:我梗係跟住你地啦.........
晴:呀偉...我同心心一齊去玩啦..8
偉:呀信...咁我同你地一齊啦...
明:呀詩..你都同佢地一齊啦...
玩完係e道等啦.....8..
ch1-3
2 term人都玩完啦....
不過..呀朗玩到嘔...呀朗去左陪佢....
信:不如我地去玩....越礦飛車囉....
晴:你地玩啦...我有d驚呀...
詩:我都唔想玩呀(見到附近有野食)...呀晴我陪你啦....
(拉住佢就走左去la...)
[其餘既人:欣,婷,心,偉,明,希]
希:(諗)得返6個人...咁是但一個咪要同女仔坐...
今次我做好人啦...比呀偉呀明一齊坐....
希:(同呀欣講)你係呀欣呀可??
欣:55....做咩....
希:等陣我同你坐..你唔mind嫁可...???
欣:唔mind....
希:你唔會驚玩e 樣野瓜....
欣:玩過唔知幾多次lu.........(突然..等左陣)...點會驚呀.....
係咪你驚..想我陪你呀.....
希:我先唔驚e d野.....
玩完咪先邊個驚囉....hehe(奸笑)
欣:好呀.....
[玩緊既時候呀希覺得好怪...坐佢前面既女仔個個都叫得好大聲...
點解呀欣e個女仔..可以唔一粒聲都冇....
玩完la..到落車既時候...呀希先發現呀欣眼紅紅..就問佢]
希:你冇事呀嘛??
欣:哦...我冇事....
[呀希睇得出呀欣佢唔係因為驚先咁樣....所以就笑笑口咁講]
希:冇事就行快d la....佢地行左過個面啦....
欣:嗯嗯..
[呀婷一見到呀欣就知佢有事啦(p.s呀婷係呀欣最好既fd點會睇唔出佢有事呀)
婷:呀欣你做咩呀??
欣:我冇野呀......呀婷....陪我過個面呀...好唔好....
婷:55...行啦..
日暮籬 2008-7-18 12:24
ch1-4
婷:呀欣.....其實....你....係咪......
(呀婷已經知呀欣....諗緊咩....)
婷:係咪...諗緊....呀...軒.........(呀軒係呀欣以前既男友)
(呀婷講到e道,呀欣又開始...眼紅紅...)
欣:嗯....我記得......上一次黎e道....係同佢一齊黎嫁....
今次黎e道.....我仲係...放唔低佢......
婷:(有小小惡) 你唔係同我一齊發過誓唔再諗個d野...唔再拍拖嫁咩....
我宜家都放低左.....點解....你仲要諗住個個賤人???
欣:我.....(想喊)..點解....帶比我開心回憶既係佢.....
令我最傷心個個....都係佢....
婷:(有d嬲) 咁你都知佢係帶比傷,痛...咁你仲成日諗住佢做咩....
個個賤人根本唔值得你去為佢喊....
欣:呀婷..................
(過左一陣)
欣:我決定要係e道放低佢.......做返一個開開心心既周芷欣.....
婷:咁咪好囉...記住呀...唔好再諗啦...唔係冇fd做.....
欣:佢同你比...佢係我個心入面連一粒沙既大細都冇呀....
我唔會為左佢而放棄一個咁多年既fd.....
[其實呀希由佢地兩個走開左開始....就一路跟住佢地..
佢好驚呀欣唔知會有d咩事,佢都從未試過為左1個女仔...
而咁擔心,緊張...]
希:(諗)點解...佢同個d女仔咁唔同...
佢地日日都只係掛住做埋個d無聊野(寫情信比呀希,等呀希放學......)
點解...............
上回
希:(諗)點解...佢同個d女仔咁唔同...
佢地日日都只係掛住做埋個d無聊野(寫情信比呀希,等呀希放學......)
點解...............
ch2-1
希(諗):點解...............愛情e樣無聊野真係可以令人.........
hey,..我又唔係佢諗黎做咩.....
(走返去大隊道)
明:我同呀詩去第2道玩啦...88
晴:呀偉我地都走啦....(拉住呀偉..一聲88都冇講就閃左)
[得返呀欣,婷,心,希,信,朗]
(呀信依然係個句)
信:咁我地宜家去邊呀??
心:去..個邊啦...去完個道再去埋個道啦......
欣:好啦....今日我地要玩到夠本先好走...........
婷:那..呀欣係你話嫁ge....
欣:行啦仲講...(拉住呀婷同呀心就行啦)
欣:(行行下令返轉頭)你地3個男仔仲企係道做咩呀...唔夠薑呀?
信:邊個講嫁...(沖左埋去,呀朗同呀希仲係個道講緊野...)
欣:(大叫)個面個兩個傻佬....快d同我彈過黎呀....
朗:傻你個頭...(心諗你就真係傻啦..頭先又喊宜家又叫...)
[頭先佢同呀希就係係道講緊呀欣個件事...
呀希將佢心入面既問號全部問哂呀朗..........
............................
希:到底點解呀??
朗:有咩點解啫...我地林少爺都會對女仔有興趣??
哦....你死啦林希...你鍾意人.......
希:你講咩呀.....你知我對女仔冇興趣你就唔好亂up野啦....
朗:咁樣講....好明顯係鍾意人la....(e個時候咁埋呀欣就大叫la..)]
朗:行la呀希..仲諗...再唔行...人地唔等你ge la....
希:你咩意思先....
朗:乜野咩意思呀...行啦.....
[就係咁呀希就將佢個d問號全部放返入個心道....
同佢地去反la....]
日暮籬 2008-7-18 12:25
ch2-2佢地玩左成日...個個都好攰.....
[某地鐵站外 林散既時候....]
欣:好耐未試過玩幾咁din啦.....今日真係好開心呀...
婷:55..不過以後你日日都會好開心嫁啦..hoho(奸笑)...因為有我係道....
心:(奸奸地咁講)仲有我tim呀....haha...
婷:都好晏啦....我走先啦...呀媽要我返去食飯呀....
心:嘩...咁乖呀....扮乖女...
婷...你估我係你呀....走啦88..
心:888....呀欣咁我地宜家去邊道好呀??
欣:5...................
信:不如去唱k ar??
心:死仔信...我又唔係問你...你做咩答呀.....仲有...玩左成日你唔攰嫁咩....
仲唱k...............
欣:心心.....我有d攰....我...走先啦......
(轉身就走左去啦)
心:喂........係咪咁呀你地...1個2都係咁.........
朗:仲有我喎....(行過去呀心隔離...搭佢呀心個膊頭)
心:妖...又唔係同你好熟,死開d啦.......
信:你地兩個去唔去打機呀....
希:唔去啦..我有野做....走先....(沖左落地鐵口)
信:又少左個啦....咁冇引我都係走la.....
朗:88....心心...你住邊嫁(奸奸地)...不如...我同你一齊走啦....
心:唔洗啦....多謝哂...我都係去搭巴士啦....怕左你....
朗:(突然好認真)我唔係同你玩ge....我同你一齊走啦....
心:(覺得呀朗有d問題...冇啦啦咁認真...就)好la好la....xxx道呀....
朗:咁岩啦...我都係住個頭....快d行啦...有車啦.....(足實心心隻手...拉心心走)
ch2-3
當呀朗拉住呀欣走既同時....
呀希都係地鐵站入面搵到呀欣既縱影......
希:呀欣....
欣:e...你唔係同佢地去玩ge咩??
希:5啦...我有野要做....係呢...你跑得咁快做咩呀...好趕咩??
欣:......唔係呀...
希:車黎啦.......
[e一日都唔知咩日子...上到車上面....個卡車上面都冇乜人....得個老婆婆
佢地兩個都冇講野...直到...]
希:呀欣.....有d野想問你.....
欣:5..問啦...
希:其實...你今日做咩.....喊......
[呀欣唔知點答佢好....冇出到聲...]
希:sor呀..你唔想提...咁當我冇問過啦......
[呀欣過左一陣先答]
欣:點可以當你冇問過....你係問左就問左嫁啦......其實(未講完呀希就話..)
希:其實你唔想講真係可以唔講....
欣:其實...我上一次黎海洋公園係同我男朋友黎既..............咁....
諗返起咪.......你明ge la可...
希:明...sor呀...(其實呀希根本唔係想知e d野...因為佢都聽到呀婷講)
[呀希講完之後..兩個人又好一段時間冇講野...]
欣:其實...你地d男仔....係咪靜係得e幾種....
一種就係花心大蘿白,見一個鍾意一個.一種就係想盡辦法去追女仔...
追到啦..又再用大話去呃人.........(想喊)係咪就係咁呀......???
希:........(呀希見到呀欣咁一時間都唔知講咩好)
欣:呀希..你答我la...係咪呀(喊緊)
[個個婆婆見到呀欣喊到咁]
婆:你(指住呀希)係唔係就係個個女仔頭先講既個d人呀....
你唔係真心既就唔好追人啦.....d女仔心靈好易受傷嫁....
你地d男仔一日靜係識得玩....玩完人就飛起人....
呀婆雖然係老..但係我都後生過...
一個受左傷既心...係好難好嫁....
其實你地兩個都幾有情侶相呀...
就咁就分手好似哂左d喎...
唔怕話你地知啦...呀婆都識小小睇相ge....
好好對人啦死仔.....
(講完..岩岩好車門就打開左la...)
欣:(冇喊la)sorry....攪到你比個婆婆鬧...不過佢又幾好笑喎.....
希:唔緊要啦....55...仲以為我地係情侶....haha....
欣:咁咪....."為屈"左你囉...我d咁既女仔...點會.....
希:咩為唔為屈呀.....仲有咩你d咁既女仔呀...
你起碼5係個d又姣,又冇自知之明既女仔先啦.....
唔好成日諗埋一邊啦......
[呀欣又冇出聲]
希:計我話...如果你係我女朋友既話...我洗唔舍得飛你....
[呀希無意中就講左佢心入面最想同呀欣講既野出黎.....]
[咁岩得咁橋...車門又開啦..]
欣:我到啦....8(沖落車)
希:欣..(跟住佢沖落車)
[呀希用9秒9...跟住呀欣....一路跟到佢出左地鐵站..就追上佢啦
再一手拉住呀欣]
希:呀欣...
日暮籬 2008-7-18 12:26
上回
[呀希用9秒9...跟住呀欣....一路跟到佢出左地鐵站..就追上佢啦
再一手拉住呀欣]
希:呀欣...
ch3-1
希:呀欣...
[一野攬住呀欣...呀欣好驚訝...]
欣:呀希呀...你放手la....我要走啦....
[反抗....但都唔夠呀希大力]
希:唔放....
欣:我叫你放開我呀....係咪朋友先...係就比我走啦.....
希:唔放...死都唔會放......我唔要你做我既朋友.....
我要你做我女朋友......
[e d表白既說話係呀希咁大個人第一次講...
佢逆都第一次係街上面攬住一個女仔......
佢終於鬆開隻手..............]
欣:點解.............點解呀.....點解你地鍾意一個人....可以咁容易講出口....
我地兩個今日第一次見咋......我連你全名係咩我都唔知呀...
鍾意一個人.....係咪真係可以咁兒戲呀????
希:由我第一見見到你開始...我就已經...覺得你同其他女仔唔同....
你唔認識我呀嘛...我地由朋友開始囉....就算你真係唔鍾意我....
你最少都比個機會我ar???
一對企係隔離既情侶見到佢地咁.....
女:你咪同佢做下朋友先囉....睇清楚佢個人再決定都未遲呀.....
男:55...我同佢(女)都係咁樣開始嫁......
女+男:你咪比個機會佢囉....
男:(對住呀希講)比心機呀...個陣時我都係好似你宜家咁....
我精神上支持你....我地走先啦....
希:佢地都咁講囉....呀欣...你....(未講完..呀欣就)
上回
希:佢地都咁講囉....呀欣...你....(未講完..呀欣就)
ch3-2
欣:好...但係你唔好對我抱咁大希望呀....
我冇講過一定會同你行嫁........
希:.....只要你比個機會我....就得la....
欣:機會比左你啦...我走先......
[連係邊道都唔知..就跑左去啦........
跑到攰...就等底左.....拎左個電話出黎...]
欣:喂...係唔係呀婷呀??
婷:呀欣?有咩咁急呀...氣都喘埋.....
欣:你同你媽食完飯未呀???
婷:食完嫁啦...不過呀詩未返到屋企呀...我地咁早過去都冇用....
欣:咁你宜家係邊呀....我黎搵你呀......
婷:岩岩係你樓下行過.....我係個個公園道等你...你快d黎啦.....
欣:55...我會盡快嫁la..88
[公園]
婷:你黎到啦.....
欣:55...(喘氣)
婷:你條氣順返先同我講發生咩事la.....
[之後呀欣就將今日呀婷走左之後既野話哂比呀婷知....]
婷:咁你對佢有咩感覺先....
欣:....佢個人就幾好既...做朋友應該幾好...
但係....
婷:咁係就同佢做朋友咪得囉....
反正我諗佢冇咁易改變到你個個鐵咁既心ge la....
欣:最好啦....我驚佢唔知會做出d咩出黎咋.....
婷:應該冇事既....
[呀婷電話響...]
婷:呀詩???你返到去那??
詩:55就返到嫁啦...你地都唔好咁晏啦....唔係我就唔比門你地入....
婷:55....係呀..心心佢今晚唔去你道嫁啦....
詩:我知啦....咁你地快d返黎啦...唔講啦88
婷:呀欣..你唔好諗咁多啦....
我地宜家返去呀詩道la.....
欣:55..我冇野嫁啦,快d返去啦....
[行行下....呀欣電話響]
欣:喂...
希:係我呀.....
欣:你...................
s!u-珊 2008-7-23 12:59
-::十卜十卜.....
日暮籬 2008-8-15 20:45
ch4
欣:你...................可唔可以比我靜下呀...
希:sor呀.......................咁88..
[呀希驚呀欣會失控...又好似今日咁....就冇再問...]
婷:係佢???
欣:55...
婷:佢同你講左d咩??
欣:就係咩都冇講....我都唔知點解...一聽到佢把聲就覺得....
好唔自在....我諗遲d會冇野嫁啦..你唔洗擔心....
婷:55...行啦...
呀詩屋企-----------------------------------------
呀詩:你地終於返到黎那..
欣:55....不過我有d攰呀....呀詩(奸奸地)不如你比我沖涼先啦今日....
詩:唔制....
婷:呀詩...你比佢沖先啦....(細細聲係呀詩耳邊講:今日發左左D野..攪到佢唔係咁開心呀....)
詩:呀...我想食D野先呀.....呀欣都係比你沖先啦.........
欣:(笑)呀詩...我愛你......(講完就飛奔去洗白白)
婷:呀詩..你唔洗望住我啦...我唔會講ge....
詩:車..唔講咪唔講...不過你...盡量開解下佢啦...
婷:55
[洗緊白白既呀欣]
欣:佢到底係個咩人黎嫁...我地今日先第一次見....
有咩可能佢會咁快鍾意左我喎.....
何況..佢咁令仔...點會鍾意我e d咁既女仔先得ge......
我諗佢都係玩下ge啫...佢唔會鍾意我既.....
[佢沖完涼出去發現有個msg...:::
呀欣....睇落去先啦...唔係一知道係我即刻del左e個msg
我個名叫林希..係xxx中學讀f.3c...
好高興今日識到你...
不過請你將 我今日做過令你唔開心既事忘記...
我會好好咁做你既朋友...你放心
希]
欣(諗):林希.....希望你唔會同我拉上任何關係啦...
黎緊既ch5同6都係講心心既.....
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ch5
講返呀心...(呀朗拉住佢開始ch2-3)
朗:88....心心...你住邊嫁(奸奸地)...不如...我同你一齊走啦....
心:唔洗啦....多謝哂...我都係去搭巴士啦....怕左你....
朗:(突然好認真)我唔係同你玩ge....我同你一齊走啦....
心:(覺得呀朗有d問題...冇啦啦咁認真...就)好la好la....xxx道呀....
朗:咁岩啦...我都係住個頭....快d行啦...有車啦.....(足實心心隻手...拉心心走)-------------------------------------------------------------------------
ch5
上到車
心:(面紅)你可以放低我隻手未呀....
朗:(笑笑口講)唔放得唔得....
心:你試下....係咁既話我下個站就落車.....
朗:玩下啫...洗唔洗咁喎....(放開左心心隻 手)
心:(摸住呀朗個頭)咁就乖啦...
朗:你當我係咩呀.....
心:..5....我細佬....haha....
朗:(諗:原來我比你個感覺係個細路)
好似我大過你嫁喎...
心:咁又點....
朗:冇......可以點(好細聲咁講)
[之後呀朗都冇再出過聲....]
心:做咩唔講野.....你唔似係d咁既人喎...
朗:下..我似d咩人先....(控個頭埋去心心道..貼住佢塊面)..係唔係....
心 :(一野推開佢個頭)妖..我唔係同你好熟ge咋...你唔好痴埋黎呀....
朗:我係要痴呀.....
[心心岩岩諗住令過黎星呀朗一巴...呀朗就一野痴左落佢個咀道...
兩個就黎左個kiss.............]
心:推開佢....你做咩呀....
朗:我..我冇心ge..........
心:我點知你有心定冇心呀.....
朗:(有d嬲)咁你想我有心定冇心呀....
心:(細細聲講)有心......
朗:(呀朗聽到佢講..又再控埋去...)
我聽到你講ge....
心:妖.....乜你咁ge.......喂..我好攰呀...
借個膊頭比我....(都未等呀朗答好已經 i 左落去)
朗:你訓教個樣真係好得意(笑)
日暮籬 2008-8-15 20:46
ch6
心:(發開口夢)咩話..個個人好得意...品味真係差....
佢係衰人黎ge.........你唔好行埋去呀.....................
[呀朗一路望住發開口夢既心心..]
心:佢溝你呀...你唔好受呀...佢玩你ge咋...........
我梗係知la.......(開始留眼淚) 我都比佢玩過.......
朗:(呀朗見到心心咁...就搖醒佢)心心.....你冇野呀嗎??
心:下..我有咩呀....
朗:你頭先一路發開口夢一路喊呀....我差d比你嚇死la...
心:(摸下塊面)真係喎....我頭先係唔係好樣衰呀....
朗:唔係...不過我真係比你嚇死呀...冇啦啦喊...
心:其實.....唔係冇lala ge.....其實我試過好多次都係咁ge la....
發夢醒左之後就發覺自己喊緊....仲要每次個夢都係一樣ge......
(好細聲)唔通佢真係對我咁重要.......
朗:(又聽到佢講咩,好認真咁講)以後你就唔會再發d咁既夢ge la...
因為有我係道.....(攬住心心)
心:(推開佢)你....我...同你...冇可能ge...
朗:點解喎......
心:總之你唔好問咁多...我地一定唔可以係埋一齊...
我希望你仲係我既朋友....
朗:............55......到啦...落車la....
[呀朗送心心返去既e段路上面...都冇出過聲...]
心:呀朗...我到啦...88
朗:心心..或者你宜家接受唔到我....但係...我會等你ge...
心:呀朗..你唔好咁傻la....
朗:總之點都好....我一定會令你接受我ge....
心:唔可以ge....(細聲)我唔想有d咩事發生係你身上....我唔想....
我走la 88..(好似曉飛咁..話咁快就唔見左)
朗:到底點解....點解佢明明對我有feel..又話唔可以同我係埋一齊.....
ch7心:那..心心我同你講呀....你唔好再諗個個呀朗啦....
你唔記得左......呀光..既死啦咩......
...........................................................................
第2日...星期日....
詩去左拍拖.....
欣+婷+心3個都冇出去....
婷:心心你咩事呀...咁大對熊貓眼既....
心:係呀...尋晚成晚冇訓囉.....
欣:下...你又冇訓呀.....咩事呀....
[心心就將尋晚呀朗同佢講既野講哂比佢地兩個聽]
心:我都唔知點好...
婷:咁你覺得佢個人點ar???
心:佢個人真係幾好既....佢見到我喊個個樣真係嚇到面都青埋ge...
欣:咁你對佢有冇feel?
心:..........(諗左陣)..我都唔知e種feel係唔係鍾意佢既feel....
婷:如果你真係鍾意佢既話.........好好咁睇清佢份人先啦....
我唔想你...........
心:我都明既......仲有...呀光(心前bf)佢......就算我對呀朗真係個種feel...
我都唔想呀朗佢好似.......呀光個件事....我都仲(想喊).....
係我害死佢.(喊)...........
欣:心心呀...呀光既死..根本同你一d關係都冇...你唔好攬哂上身....
心:如果唔係我...發左誓之後..唔理誓言再同佢拍拖...佢根本就唔會死....
婷:心心呀...個日係佢班手下唔夠人地打....要佢出馬......
佢係比人打死..唔係比你害死ge...
欣:心心..你接受事實la...根本就唔關你事...
心:我都好想佢唔係比我害死...佢之前打交都唔會輸ge...
自從同左我一齊之後.....
欣:咁佢d對手都越黎越強....e樣野你根本控制唔到嫁....
婷:仲有呀..你唔好迫自己話呀光你你害死ge la...
根本係就好清楚到底邊個先係真正害死呀光既人....
你要嬲既應該嬲佢地...而唔係你自己呀....你明唔明ar?
心:(停左..冇喊...過左一陣先出聲).......真係?
婷:梗係...
心:比多d時間我...我會試下....接受...........事實....
婷+欣:咁就好la...........
日暮籬 2008-8-15 20:47
ch8
呀欣經過心心件事之後...
都開始慢慢放低呀軒....
之後個日上堂...呀欣成日係道諗................
---------------------------------------下面面我=欣
其實呀婷佢講得好岩.....為左佢(呀軒)d咁既人...
點解我3番4次都忘記唔到佢...
點解.......點解佢要呃我....
點解佢要當我係玩具...
乜我真係咁差.....
我以為佢唔係個d睇人個樣黎鍾意既人.....
[因為呀欣以前都幾肥下...係同呀軒分左手之後...日日喊...好小食野
先慢慢瘦哂]
我唔會再為d咁既人喊.......
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[呀欣諗到e道..又收到個msg]
[呀欣...
又係我...我聽呀婷講..話你今日心不在焉咁...
係咪有d咩唔開心...你可以同我講ge...
唔好放係個心道呀... 希]
呀欣睇得出呀希既關心....
就sd返個msg比佢
[希...
我冇咩事..你唔洗擔心..= )
不過我真係有d野想同你講...今日放學係學校個個廢操場道等 欣]
[欣
我一定會黎...等我 希]
---------------放學---------------------------------------------
欣:呀婷,心心...我約左人呀...走先la..
婷:心心..知唔知佢約左邊個??(心入面估緊係唔係呀希呢?)
心:你都唔知..我又點會知喎...hey咪諗咁..走la...
------------------廢操場-----
欣:e..你咁早黎到既....
希:我冇理由要你等既....
係呢...搵我做咩?
欣:........
ch9
欣:........冇呀...其實你唔洗咁驚...我真係唔介意同你做朋友....
你都唔洗驚你既出現會影響到我既心情....
希:你唔介意就好la...我幾驚你仲嬲.....
欣:(突然黑面)原來我似係d咁既人.....(笑)
希:(笑)見到你笑就好la...
欣:你係咪前世未見過人笑.....
希:係未見過你心情咁開朗.........
欣:以前我一向都係咁....以後我都會係咁...
ar...宜家幾點呀??
希:4點半到la....你趕時間???
欣:唔係...今日d數好難呀...我想快d返去做咁啫....
希:你都識話難la...咁你識唔識做ge....(笑)
欣:.................妖..你明知我唔識做又問....
希:咁你唔識做咪叫我教你囉...(笑)(呀希d成績係爆好的)
欣:你早講la...就黎exam la...我唔想又死......
希:e樣你就唔洗擔心la....haha..有我林希係道...
欣:講到好似好勁咁...
希:f3全級頭5名之內...你話勁唔勁先.......
總之有我幫你補習你冇死la....
欣:咁多謝先la喎...但係exam你自己唔洗溫書咩?
希:so easy la...
欣:你都好串喎....(呀欣有d唔鍾意個d因為自己成績好就哂命既人)
希:(認真)咁你想唔想你今次考好d先.........
欣:梗想.....
希:想就得la.......
欣:咁我走先la....有咩唔識再問你la......8
希:8..記住問呀........
日暮籬 2008-8-15 20:48
ch10
呀詩屋企..(仲記唔記得呀婷+欣+心心都去左呀詩道住)
心:呀欣..你頭先去左邊道...留低我同呀婷一齊返黎..........
欣:冇呀..去左搵呀希囉......
心:哦...你死la...要仔唔要fd....
欣:冇呀...有d野同佢講咁啫...你唔好諗左去第2道....
咪住....你個呀朗呢??
心: =p..唔關你事
[呀朗有sd過msg叫心心黎見下佢..不過心心佢覺得見到呀朗會好似唔知點咁
就冇去到........]
婷:心心...你諗掂未ge啫...我睇得出..你對佢好有feel喎.......
心:呀婷...你講咩...(bear住呀婷)
欣:人少少就認左佢la...不過你唔會真係咁快就同佢拍拖下化....
婷:係囉...你連佢係咩人都唔清楚....
心:喂喂喂...我幾時有話過要同佢拍拖(有d面紅)
不過老實講...做朋友就一定會ge la.........
欣:做做下朋友就變左男朋友ge la..
心:呀欣.......(bear住佢)
婷:不過你可以復原得咁快都係一件好事......
心:咁既然件事都唔關我事...我仲諗黎做咩...不過我仲有d掛住佢....
婷:要你一時間放低佢係冇可能ge la慢慢黎la....
何況我都估到你總有一日會因為冇男友而頂唔順ge la...
個d誓言既野根本就對你冇影響.........
心:咁呀光件事又唔關我事...政明左個誓言根本就做唔到d咩...
仲理佢黎做咩喎.............
欣:睇你個樣好似好想快d有拖拍喎...
心:(面紅)邊有呀........
婷:總之你就小心la..我都唔想你好似我同呀欣咁...
唔係話唔想你拍拖...不過...
心:得la..我明ge la.........
[講完就一邊沖入呀詩間房一邊大叫...:::呀詩你幾時整野我食呀...好餓la我..]
[呀婷就同呀欣講]
23+24 2008-8-16 16:41
十卜你呀!
post啦post啦!^^
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